There are as many ways to write a press release as there are people who write them. No matter what your style is, no matter what promoting, there are a few key things you need to do before you write a press release so that it gets noticed and you get coverage.
First, you must decide what product or service you want to get publicity for and how you do that is this easy 2-step process:
1. Find out what your customers want and how your product or service fills that need
To do this you need to think about everything that you and/or your products and services can do for the customers. Ask yourself such questions as:
Can I solve a problem the consumer has?
Can I make life better for the consumer?
Can I fill a want or need the consumer has?
What do my current customers like best about what I offer?
When you have listed your answers to these questions, focus in on the one service or product you have that best matches up with the most positive or “yes” answers from the questions above.
Remember! If you don’t absolutely believe in your product or service you simply won’t get as much free publicity. Your belief in your products comes through in the press releases you send and in the interviews you do. Believability is crucial to your success.
2. Do you have a service or product that can make someone’s life better?
Does your product save someone time or money?
Can your product help to eliminate the headaches of daily life?
Do you have information that makes it easier for some to do their job?
Now that you have done this short exercise, it's time to write your press release:
Writing a Press Release that Works
1. Make sure you have a killer headline and all of the important information is placed in the first paragraph of the release. Headlines are the single most important part of any press release. If your headline doesn’t grab the reader’s attention, they won’t read on and you will have lost your chance for free publicity. Five times as many people read headlines as read the rest of the press release, so this is of critical importance.
2. Double check all spelling and grammar. Nothing says you're a “hack” like a press release that is poorly worded or one that contains spelling, grammar and sentence structure errors. Always use your computer’s spell checker and if possible, have someone you know and trust read your release before you send it out. This way any small mistakes have a better chance of being found and corrected before you send the release to the media.
Types of Headlines for Your Press Release
There are 7 different types of headlines that you can use to write a killer press release. They are:
1. The headline offering a benefit
This headline is what it says it is, a headline that offers the consumer a benefit for using you or your product. Its effectiveness depends on how well you’ve asked the market what they want and know what the hot buttons are when it comes to the topic.
Having a benefit driven headline is one of the best ways to get attention because you are offering a benefit that people cannot get somewhere else. Here’s a sample of a benefit driven headline:
“New Computer System Speeds Transactions and Save Millions” What are the implied and real benefits of this headline?
- There is something new
- That something is fast, so it saves time
- That something saves money
2. The headline with a personal touch
This headline can be a combination of many types of headline, but may also contains a person’s name. For instance:
“Jana Jones Teaches 8th Grade Children to Skydive” What are the sales points in this headline?
- Someone has done something interesting
- 8th Grade students did something unusual
- They all went skydiving!
This is a type of story that should, on a local level, attract TV news crews to the event as it really is news.
3. The testimonial headline
When you combine a testimonial headline with any of the other type of headline, you present a powerful case that gets attention. The testimonial headline is what it says; it offers a customer, or associate’s testimonial as the headline.
“Editor of LA Times Says That Mirror Group Offers Best Project Management in LA” What are the benefits of this headline?
- Big, recognized organization lauds a local firm
- Something new is happening
- Someone has been recognized for outstanding work
4. Discount prices headline
A discount or sale can make a very effective headline, but only if the sale is something unusual, or special. This headline is very straight forward and speaks directly to the reporters and consumers.
“Joe Barns Chevrolet’s Buy One Car Get One Car Free This Friday Only”
This is an actual headline used in Oregon. The name of the dealer has been changed by request. Talk about a great headline! How many benefits can you find in this headline? What can you do to attract attention to you and your business?
5. Pure news headline
If you have a product or service that is pure news (usually something new, or something you can’t get anywhere else) this is a phenomenal way to get free publicity.
“Turkey in Two Hours... GE Trivection Technology Is All About Great Food, Fast
A word of warning about the news headline press release. Never focus the news on the product itself. Focus on the benefits of the product.
6. How to do it headline
Since the beginning of time we’ve tried to know “how to” do just about everything. How to build, how to make life easier, how to get rich, etc… So the “how to” headline can be a fantastic attention grabber if you are offering people a way to learn how to do something. Here’s an example of a headline that was used and resulted in over $50,000 in free publicity.
“How Many People See Every Movie for the Rest of Their Lives, For Free!” Benefit laden headline, you bet.
- Involves many people
- Everyone loves movies
- And now they get to see them for free
7. The solution oriented headline
When you offer a solution, people listen. This headline takes into account all of our frustrations at the things in our lives that just aren’t right. All media outlets love to report solutions to their listeners, readers, or viewers because they too know that solutions make happy customers. And they want their customers to be happy.
“New organic pesticide kills all spiders within 12 hours”
“Black Widow Spider Bites Can Kill Children
New all organic pesticide removes spider risk immediately”
Both of these headlines offer a solution (the removal of spiders). However, the second headline uses the tactic of playing on the fears of the public (being bitten by a black widow spider) and makes a more compelling headline.
POWER HEADLINE WORDS
Here is my top ten list of all time great words to use in a press release headline. These have been time-tested and are proven to work.
1. Breakthrough
2. Announcing
3. Discover
4. Free
5. How Would (or How Do)
6. Shows
7. Only
8. New
9. Lower (or Higher)
10. Update
Make Sure Your Contact Information is on Release
When you get ready to finalize your press release check and make sure that all of your contact information is listed at the bottom of the release so that reporters and editors can easily find it and call you back.
The Press Release Golden Rule
As with all marketing, promotion, PR, and advertising strategies the golden rule for writing a killer press release headline is to - TEST, TEST, and TEST some more.
You should write at least 5 different headlines for each press release so that you can see which one sounds better and delivers more of a punch. Until you get the hang of writing great headlines I suggest that you run your five or ten headlines for each press release by your spouse, partner, co-worker, or friend. See which one they like, which ones they don’t like and ask them why.
If you decide to hire an ad agency, or press release writer to write releases for you, make sure that you remember that it is your business and your reputation on the line, not theirs. Never let someone convince you of what to send to the media. Always approve every release that goes out, no matter who writes it and sends it.
In order to help you understand the difference between good and bad headlines, here is a short list to compare. These are all actual headlines I pulled form press releases.
GOOD HEADLINES
“Children’s IQ Raised 10 Points by age 2”
This is good because very parent wants to know how to have a smarter child
“$4,000 in Cash Will be Given Away Tonight!”
This is good because everyone wants cash and you’re giving it away
“How to get the Perfect Putt, Every Time You Golf”
This works because there at least a million golfers that want to know “how to” have the perfect putt every time they golf
“Vitamins and Great Sex – What You Need to Know, Now”
Vitamins and sex. What more of a hook do you need? Well, you might need it “right now.” A great
headline…
“I Lost 56 Pounds in Just Six Weeks – A True Story”
This works because of the “A true story” hook. We all love to know how someone accomplished
something faster than we thought possible.
“How to Legally Steal Customers”
This works because every business person on the planet want to know how to take business away from their competition
BAD HEADLINES
“Are You Ready to Make Millions?
This doesn’t tell you anything. Make millions at what?
“Local Photographer Takes Graduation Pictures”
So what? Why did he take them? What does it mean to a reporter?
“Customer Dies and We Have to Clear Merchandise”
You might say this is a good headline as it will get attention, but when there’s no whimsy to it and someone really did die and you have to sell-off goods, it’s just not news, it's weird. It’ll get a laugh, but not much coverage and if it's not a joke headline to get attention, you might have some push back from the media.
A good headline compels the reader to read more and a bad headline doesn’t tell you much, if anything, so there’s no reason to read further.
The only reason a headline exists is to get the reader to read your first paragraph. The headline is really the advertisement for the rest of your release. Make it a good one.
There you have it, in one blog a simple way to understand what a press release is and how they can best work for you. Get writing and if you are looking for some serious results, I only recommend one person, and I receive no compensation from him for this recommendation. That person is Paul Krupin form Direct Contact PR (www.directcontactpr.com) 100% of the time Paul and his methods deliver success for me and my clients. Look him up, but he is well worth the money.
I am yours in success,
Randall